himido

Milk is a nutritive beverage obtained from various animals and consumed by humans. Most milk is obtained from cows grazing that are milked using milking machine (storage). After a few hours of being collected, milk is delivered to the Dairy by a daily milk tanker. At the Dairy, the milk in the truck is weighed and is pumped into refrigerated tanks in the plant through flexible stainless steel or plastic hoses. The milk is piped into a pasteurizer to kill any bacteria. There are several methods used to pasteurize milk. In addition to being consumed as a beverage milk is also used to make cheese, cream, butter, and a variety of other products. Finally they are packaged in plastics or glassed and thenon to supermarkets adn shops, where they are kept in refrigerated display cases.

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_ Stuart's comments

Very good Mido. You have used the grammar (passive) very well to describe the process of milk production. Your writing is clear and well structured. Well done this is a really good piece of writing.